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Verbal intercourse
Can I take a moment out of your forever?
I want to see your heartbeat transcend through your trembling lips.
I want to have verbal intercourse.
Let your statements intertwine with thoughts of my response…
And form a dialect...a dialog between us
Close, not specifically in proximity…
I want to talk with you.
Relate UN moistened statements soaked in the wetness of our conversation.
Let our lips embrace the same words like a kiss…
And we can let our…
Tongues twist tales of tantalizing treasures thought to be timeless as they transcend trails towards tomorrow.
As if your lungs are beating down the doors to my ear lobes…
To the raising hair follicles of my neck…
To where your conversation should be…
Intimately placed so I can hear all of your passion.
Focusing on a particular point of view…
As if holding on to a piece of you.
Touching your opinions until your beliefs get saturated with the impression that you need to change your mind.
As our ears seductively fondle each others sentences.
Can I take a moment out of your forever?
I want to have verbal intercourse.
Begin our parley…
With foreplay consisting of messages of forgiveness…
Entering forbidden areas of your forethought…
With the force and foresight of our forefathers…
Forging paths of forever…
To forewarn foreigners from fornicating in your forgotten forest…
Causing the formation of the forsaken to be fortified.
Then we can strip down protected layers until its communicated nothingness.
As I unzip the fly that holds my thoughts.
We watch our conversations lose the remaining clothing of its façade…
And get naked to the point…
Naked like parenthesis without words in it…
Like sentences with no nouns and verbs in it…
Exposing the naked truth dressed in color coordinated lies.
Showing you how big my words are.
As I won’t put it in the conversation all at once…
But instead slow and easy…
Then allow the penetration of our talks to go deep…
Until I see my words bouncing on your eardrums…
Causing me to have uncontrolled lyrical erections…
Just blurting out things at a moment of silence…
I want to talk with you…
No matter the motion of our subject matter…
My conversation holds its firmness and length.
Can I take a moment out of your forever?
I want to have verbal intercourse.
As this one moment stand turns into extra hours and days of sitting and enjoying each others passion for dialogue.
Let my thoughts, conversation live with you.
As we explore unprotected, unadulterated topics…
Until I get you pregnant by my words.
Causing you to hold the thought for nine minutes…
Before birthing a union of our view point…
As I hope further tests confirm I fathered such thoughts…
So I can take care of it…
If it’s not mine…I’ll adopt it as my own…
Change it…
Watch it grow into our further understanding of one another.
As I will gladly pay the price of attention demanded to the growing cost to raise our communication.
I want to have a divulged dialect with you.
I want to hold casual correspondence with you.
I want to have lyrical interactions with you.
I want to talk with you.
Let’s engage in verbal intercourse.
Can I take a moment out of your forever?
