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Chocolatemoms

Aug 12, 2008 at 03:42 PM

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Not interested in your lies or your games
Your fame or your name
And the fact you're rocking the new J's don't impress me much
Da line you used to get my attention wasn't intriguing enough
So you could have saved the"A Bay Bay"
No need to tell you my name
Cause you gave me one of your own
Either chicken head, bytch or ho
Funny thing is I'm just like your mother
Strong, independent black woman
Next time you approach a woman like me
You better come better than that

I'm a queen
In need of a king on the throne
Cause I have a son
And my son is more man than you
Has more matters than you
Holds the door for a lady and he's only two
So to me you are the baby, boy
And since I'm already raising a boy to treat women like he's a man
No need to raise two.

Only other man I know is his father
One of the strongest I know
A real man takes care of his home
And although we're not together, he stills takes care of his home
So to answer your question
No I'm not interested in your lies or your games
your name or your fame

Ha, you're offended now
Guess that makes us even now
Cause you came to a queen
Trying to fill a king size shoe
When you can't even fit my baby's shoes
But try not to cry
Cause it happens to the best of them
You aren't the first or the last
Take some advice
Trade your hip hop for some spoken word
And step your game up
Always remember a queen will hold you down
While a girl brings you down
But until you're ready to step in the classroom
Just stay on the playground
Cause I'm not interested in your lies or your games
In your name or your fame

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